Review · Short stories
Five Minutes Past Monsoon
Nine stories set in the same Mumbai chawl, each one ending exactly where the rain starts.
Oberoi's second collection returns to the fictional Lakhani Chawl, a setting she has now used across two books and a handful of magazine pieces. The nine stories here share a building, a water problem, and a habit of stopping mid-scene, usually at the first drop of monsoon rain.
The strongest of them, 'Fourth Floor, No Lift', follows an elderly widow's daily negotiation with a staircase and says more about ageing in a Mumbai apartment than most full-length novels manage. The weakest, 'Wedding Season', tries the same trick with a marriage plot and finds the form too thin to hold the material.
Read together, the stories argue that a chawl is a kind of clock — everyone on a different floor, all keeping the same time. It is a tidy thesis, occasionally too tidy, but the writing earns the neatness more often than it presumes it.
“Oberoi writes endings the way a good editor writes cuts — a beat before you expect them.”
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